Thursday, January 23, 2014

Love And Raft Comments

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Love is like a raft
Sail on it or stand on the bank
When you reach the mouth of the sea write a poem
And if you are drowned we have to write an elegy!
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Rajesh Thankappan 23 January 2014

A good poem with rich imagines. Enjoyed it thoroughly.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 January 2014

Love is like a raft It cannot take its course in a stream The oars must be of good timber And all the logs should be tight tied! The bonds of love must be strong. Make sure of this before deciding to explore. Nice poem providing advice. Thank you.

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