Saturday, August 23, 2014

Love And Peace Comments

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No more confined,
To a family so small,
Now my family,
Is large and tall.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Staci Davidson 29 October 2014

Beautiful expressions of your heart. I truely love this poem. I pray you are a witness to this peace in wich all people deserve, and that your children , grandchildren and generations after get to know a peaceful life. ❤️

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David Harris 24 August 2014

An optimistic ambition for a future for all. Let's hope we will one day realise this. I like it.

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 August 2014

On the shining silver sand, They will play the game, Of hide and seek, And will share in the air, The life boosting lesson, Of coexistence. a lovely dream in a beautiful poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 August 2014

Pains will be dormant, And hatred will die, And nothing will remain, But love and peace. Poet is so brilliant and painted as often he paints the ongoing bloodshed, Red canvas is painted green with the color of peace lovely write May Allah Bring Peace To This World,

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Amitava Sur 23 August 2014

Akhtar vai - it's a lovely poem dreaming a world with no scar. I' writing 2 lines form one of my poems...... The only way to protect this world Is to love and preach peace.

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