Monday, April 19, 2010

Love And Passion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Imperceptible, surviving with no time and space
Or maybe surviving in another thrilling dimension,
Love has its distinct meanings and its grace
For melting cloud slashed sunset, in sweet detention
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Marieta Maglas
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Unnikrishnan E S 18 November 2016

Hi Marieta, How true! True Love knows no selfishness!

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Eric Cockrell 22 July 2011

very well done... love beyond selfishness... becomes what it is! good poem!

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Mary Thomson 20 April 2011

You did great on this. very good and well expressed

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Chris Jibero 10 October 2010

A good poem.Love without passion is pale.

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Chidiebere Franklin 20 September 2010

this is a great poem dear.i really like it huh.good work

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Riekairu Calo 25 August 2010

wow, , , , , your poem is strong, , , , , it awakens my veins...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 June 2010

‘Carrying deoxygenated blood, leading always to strife’ Like loveless life is a parched leaf…love is solace to soul…nice diction 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Joseph Karun 25 May 2010

Love which transcends all logic and time... nice view of love.

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Lady Grace 03 May 2010

my goshhhhhhh...so nice... carribean dreams will fall on southseas and will rise again in the heart to where love and passion takes place...ilike the words u used..so gentle and kind, so sweet and smart...

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Seema Chowdhury 02 May 2010

very interesting poem. i really enjoyed. you selection of words are excellent.

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Sarah Jane 25 April 2010

very well written poem

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 April 2010

Wondering always about the uncertainty of life...... well written but I feel my problem is different. If the first word of the line would be WANDERING then it would be of my. Really I can't bear the wonders in uncertainity. Rather can be the puppet on the hand of uncertain............... 10+ pranab

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Eyan Desir 19 April 2010

10 points very poetic wow...nice flow to go along with it...

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

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