Imperceptible, surviving with no time and space
Or maybe surviving in another thrilling dimension,
Love has its distinct meanings and its grace
For melting cloud slashed sunset, in sweet detention
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very well done... love beyond selfishness... becomes what it is! good poem!
this is a great poem dear.i really like it huh.good work
wow, , , , , your poem is strong, , , , , it awakens my veins...
‘Carrying deoxygenated blood, leading always to strife’ Like loveless life is a parched leaf…love is solace to soul…nice diction 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
my goshhhhhhh...so nice... carribean dreams will fall on southseas and will rise again in the heart to where love and passion takes place...ilike the words u used..so gentle and kind, so sweet and smart...
very interesting poem. i really enjoyed. you selection of words are excellent.
Wondering always about the uncertainty of life...... well written but I feel my problem is different. If the first word of the line would be WANDERING then it would be of my. Really I can't bear the wonders in uncertainity. Rather can be the puppet on the hand of uncertain............... 10+ pranab
Hi Marieta, How true! True Love knows no selfishness!