Sunday, June 11, 2023

Love And Pain, They Go Hand In Hand. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love and pain, they go hand in hand,
Like a rose with thorns, in a barren land.

Love brings joy, but pain lurks behind,
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2024

Greatest Beauty is in this poem, could be Poem Of The day one day.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2024

Crystal clear composition cutest created, this poem contains great Beauty, magnificently captured and brliiantly presented.5 Stars Full and myriad Stars added from the Galaxy

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Rob Lamberton 05 April 2024

"love is worth the risks it brings"

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Sandra Feldman 03 January 2024

Beautifully, excellent. So true, so complete and an unforgettable piece!

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

give you 5 stars

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

It paints the initial stages of love with the colors of beauty and bliss, inviting the reader to savor the enchantment that love can bring.

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

The metaphorical comparison of love to a 'sweet melody' is enchanting and delightful, conjuring images of joy, harmony, and euphony.

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

Dear Poet Sheeya, Your poem on Love and Pain evoke a poignant and bittersweet sense of the complex nature of love and its inherent contrasts.

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Koffi Sossou 04 July 2023

Great. But our young and innocent hearts fail to understand it. Love and pain go hand in hand👌

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

i WISH (upon a star? or five stars?) that my life had more profundity. ha ha. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

'profundity prə-fŭn′dĭ-tē, prō- noun Great intellectual insight or understanding. Intensity of feeling or conviction. Something profound or abstruse.'

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

***** and many comments I send, for (did I already mention it?) the poems great ryming, flow, and PROFUNDITY **. (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

IS continuingly a REAL WORD? And did I spell it correctly? If it is NOT a 'real word' I now declare it to BE ONE, and I further declare 'continuingly' to BE THE CORRECT SPELLING! ! ! ;)

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

'Love and pain, a bittersweet rhyme, We'll keep on loving, one day at a time.' Ain't THAT the truth, ....until 'love' can NOT overcome the continuingly-surfacing pain of some marriages etc. : (

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

(cont.) 'Bri, never use a preposition at the end of a sentence. Write, instead: I'm pretty sure PH has 'love' as one topic to choose.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

I'm pretty SURE PH has 'love' as a topic to choose from, OR, as one of my English teachers, past, and perhaps 'passed' as well, would admonish me.....(cont.)

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 June 2023

That is true. Beautifully inked. Enjoyed. Keep going.

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Nabakishore Dash 12 June 2023

Fantastic write, worthy of being read again and again dear poet.

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Pallavi Tripathi 12 June 2023

For love is worth the risks it brings, Even if it sometimes stings. It is indeed. Full *****

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M. Asim Nehal 12 June 2023

Very true, Love brings joy, but pain lurks behind, A reminder that happiness is hard to find.5***

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