Love And Pain, They Go Hand In Hand. Comments

Greatest Beauty is in this poem, could be Poem Of The day one day.

Crystal clear composition cutest created, this poem contains great Beauty, magnificently captured and brliiantly presented.5 Stars Full and myriad Stars added from the Galaxy

"love is worth the risks it brings"

Beautifully, excellent. So true, so complete and an unforgettable piece!

give you 5 stars

It paints the initial stages of love with the colors of beauty and bliss, inviting the reader to savor the enchantment that love can bring.

The metaphorical comparison of love to a 'sweet melody' is enchanting and delightful, conjuring images of joy, harmony, and euphony.

Dear Poet Sheeya, Your poem on Love and Pain evoke a poignant and bittersweet sense of the complex nature of love and its inherent contrasts.

Great. But our young and innocent hearts fail to understand it. Love and pain go hand in hand👌

i WISH (upon a star? or five stars?) that my life had more profundity. ha ha. bri : )

'profundity prə-fŭn′dĭ-tē, prō- noun Great intellectual insight or understanding. Intensity of feeling or conviction. Something profound or abstruse.'

***** and many comments I send, for (did I already mention it?) the poems great ryming, flow, and PROFUNDITY **. (CONT.)

IS continuingly a REAL WORD? And did I spell it correctly? If it is NOT a 'real word' I now declare it to BE ONE, and I further declare 'continuingly' to BE THE CORRECT SPELLING! ! ! ;)

'Love and pain, a bittersweet rhyme, We'll keep on loving, one day at a time.' Ain't THAT the truth, ....until 'love' can NOT overcome the continuingly-surfacing pain of some marriages etc. : (

(cont.) 'Bri, never use a preposition at the end of a sentence. Write, instead: I'm pretty sure PH has 'love' as one topic to choose.

I'm pretty SURE PH has 'love' as a topic to choose from, OR, as one of my English teachers, past, and perhaps 'passed' as well, would admonish me.....(cont.)

That is true. Beautifully inked. Enjoyed. Keep going.

Fantastic write, worthy of being read again and again dear poet.

For love is worth the risks it brings, Even if it sometimes stings. It is indeed. Full *****

Very true, Love brings joy, but pain lurks behind, A reminder that happiness is hard to find.5***