Friday, July 23, 2021

Love And Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The crescent moon stops for while
In the middle of the sky
To drop some sweet words knowing
Without her love I may die
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2021

A poem about enduring sorrow and pain. Gorgeously worded and amazingly rendered. I have enjoyed very much! Thank you so much for sharing,

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Varsha M 23 July 2021

Beautiful composition. Indeed this is possible. The moon says that her love can Make me a perfect man If while keeping her happy I will Endure sorrow and pain...these lines are beautiful.

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