Monday, July 11, 2016

Love And Marriage - Triple Tetractys Comments

Rating: 5.0

clouds
shower's
drops falling
wet in desires
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 10 January 2019

Intelligent poem.........................

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Suzon Albert 31 December 2018

Superb analysis on love n marriage. Every word spraks individually.

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T Rajan Evol 29 December 2018

Pure divine and unblemish. What a great description of love n marriage.

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S H 28 December 2018

Ok this is better than the previous one.

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S H 28 December 2018

Good one this is difficult to write.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2018

Wonderful write LOVE and Marriage

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T Rajan Evol 12 July 2016

Great poem within limitation.....Love before marriage in physical form is sin and marriage purifies the relations.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

Wet in desires! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 11 July 2016

For having to follow such strict guidelines, the poem turned out wonderful.

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