Love And Lust Comments

A concise and creative poem written in verse with rhythmic splendour, focused and factual. A witty composition. Thanks for sharing.

Subtle difference of ‘AGE’ and ‘TIME’…indeed very Original…so common before our eyes but not in words…yeah…Poet’s feeling can delve and bring out the occult truth…thanks Sir.. 10 {heartfelt] Ms. Nivedita UK

Well said you will know best.. With age come experiences

very cute observation lust: that panther lives within doesnot sleep at all..............

What ever be the subject, the way u express it is exquisitte and amusing.

An amuzing write and enjoyed this as always with you writting style.... Bonnie

witty stuf... u make ur readers think hard... n thats pure inteliigence... and poetic mastery... :)

you made me laugh, what a beautiful poem... indeeded... iam so flattered....thats make my day so special.... thank you my friend....you everything to your poem... God bless your health

It is a beautiful work derived from wit and experience. I love it.

Astute analogy, my friend....You do indeed have a largess for abstract cleverity, and delivering, darting, yet discreet parallels on themes/topics such as the above.....Very fine work, Kesav!

This poem is very well penned, and clearly eloquent. Two different stanzas to bind Love and Lust together and show their differences and links. I like the kind of timeless or 'lifetime through' association you give to love compared to Lust melted with dayly moments. Very nice.

the one is timeless and the other timebound, , , , good comparison and a nice poem, ,

heheh 'mad water flown' that could be taken a few ways...love the comparison of age with stages of the day...i actually did the exact same thing in my poem entitled 'a life cycle' check it out if you haven't....great poem

as love needs no time and space when blind to all reasons yet organic, superb write by the imagery of love when uniquely melds by the lucid thought,10+, thanks for sharing

both lasting n fleeting too...

Wow, this is amazing...you really are a fine poet Kesav, Thank you for your beautiful insight...that you have shared here with us best wishes Jon

Very precisely defined in Baconian style but with a touch of poetic beauty. A great piece of literature. Enjoyed a lot. Thank you for sharing it.

Short, simple, and yet so meaningful. A fine piece of yours.

Very Vividly expressed. I agree with Rajaram that moderation is desirable in all aspects of life. Excellent write, Kesav. Always a pleasure to read your work. Warmest regards, Sandra

Grows to strength with steady rage Ripe emotions sown! Lust is really makes a bustle of love