Love is something devine
falls from the heaven to earth
It expects nothing for it but
It renders everything to others including itself
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Trite. Why does love always have to be over-romanticised? This poem has got one grammar mistake which murders the romance! -Its-... genitive case. Not contraction of 'it is'.
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Nice view. Revise and correct typos.