Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Love And Lust Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is something devine
falls from the heaven to earth
It expects nothing for it but
It renders everything to others including itself
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SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN
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Anu Soneye 06 May 2018

Nice view. Revise and correct typos.

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rago rago 24 July 2009

profound truth........ and that is bitter..........

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Sara Gabriela Pino Panta 16 October 2008

Trite. Why does love always have to be over-romanticised? This poem has got one grammar mistake which murders the romance! -Its-... genitive case. Not contraction of 'it is'.

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Natalie Ricketts 24 September 2008

Brilliant! true and Brilliant! would like you to read my poem PERCEPTION, please leave a comment good or bad. thanks for sharing.x

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... Lynch 21 August 2007

Some great advice. Great poem. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Mary Das 21 August 2007

Well written. I agree with you. Thanks for sharing. Take care.

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SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

THANJAVOORE/TAMILNADU/INDIA
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