Love And Lust Comments

Just seeing this in 2025....This is OLD but GOLD

A very clever and observational poem by a very intelligent poet. Thank You

But I have to recognise the profound hurt experienced or endured and I am also sorry.

I love the shift and variations you bring in. Many aspects resonate with me, although this partly appears to me as a fever dream of Sigmund Freud. Very long, very black&white, both poles might be a continuum, mustn't be criminal, in my view. An artistic stare into the eyes of power vs. love 4/5

When a poem is this long it often becomes repetitive and I loose interest. This held my attention to the very end. Very well written.

Well done! love will always win over .

very nice

Excellent job comparing the two in so many ways. That had to have been difficult! But you did it very well Big thumbs up! 👍👍

I can't speak from a male point of view, but the drive behind isn't always a selfish concept NOR does it make one evil either. As long as others aren't hurt in the process or affected. Lust doesn'tnecessarily meanbetrayal-.it depends on circumstance.

A flowery write and beautiful juxtaposition of both. If I may ask, what does these lines from the poem mean, 'My subject is my subject. Such enveloping my subject'? .

Nicely written, made me think at every line.

Is it a poem by any standards to be featured here? ? ? ? ? ?

But if you mind can you check on mine too

This thing is cute and also true

Wonderful poem full of wisdom. Fine work!

Jazib! I so much love your poem. Bravo bro

CONGRATS YOU FINALLY MADE YOUR POEM TO THE TOPPERS LIST

This is a dualistic clarity. Very well expressed. Thank you Jazib.

So good! One that came to mind, Love is truth, Lust is lies.

Sorry for the late reply it Insightful I must say you have good flow of logic but he's got quite repetitive how long it is but overall excellent work