P.A. NOUSHAD

P.A. NOUSHAD

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
P.A. NOUSHAD
PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
Saturday, July 26, 2008

Love And Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Your eyes are in my heart,
vast, deep, bluish,
A sweet breeze now touches
the brain, heart, mind, and soul,
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Dr. Antony Theodore 25 December 2020

Your eyes in my heart, vast, deep, bluish, a sweet breeze now touches the brain, heart, mind and soul, Fine expressions of love...... very fine poem. tony

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Nixon Griffith 21 July 2018

gave me intense love shivers down my spine, excellent poem

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Uddhab Naik 17 April 2018

The words are beautifully wreathed.

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Keerthana Vk 28 November 2016

really awesome....nice concept.....

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Howard Savage 05 February 2016

Great start to the poem, Love and Love.

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Allotey Abossey 29 May 2015

This's biut'ful.. God bless you friend

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Allotey Abossey 29 May 2015

This's biut'ful.. God bless you

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 May 2015

A Beautiful poem. This poem itself is winking its eyes with love. It captivates the readers from beginning till end. I liked the flow of words and many interesting lines, adds beauty to this poem. Loved reading it. I will be reading yours many more poems. Thank you for the beautiful comment as a poet.

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Anjali Sinha 03 April 2009

lovely write nicely penned -10 anjali

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Laxmi Gaonkar 22 August 2008

There are only four questions of value in life. What is sacred? Of what is the spirit made? What is worth living for, and what is worth dying for? The answer to each is the same: only love.......

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Emma Woods 16 August 2008

as commented before, the description of the eyes through the entire poem somehow grips the reader and the poem itself is beautiful - it's amazing - every word used fits perfectly

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Jt Jayasingh 15 August 2008

A different noushad. Different from his usual. Highly lyrical and romantic but as usual with philosophical quest.

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Viola Grey 15 August 2008

I like that in this whole journey one thing remained...the eyes...vast, deep, bluish...nice work

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Sayuri Nitta 14 August 2008

awww its beautiful, i dont know how you could come up with something like that. you are a great poet.

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Anong All 12 August 2008

Ah, well nice, and very tantalizing!

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C T Heart 12 August 2008

Love and love together...what a perfect combination and piece! ! ! heartfelt...

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Seema Chowdhury 11 August 2008

wings of love, beauty and eternity all merge into one.................. such a beautiful expression, your poem is very magical and takes the reader to flow in its rhyme. excellent work of art. surely a 10.

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Lynda Robson 11 August 2008

Tender and romantic, full of good imagery too,10 for this from me, Lynda xx

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Chitra - 04 August 2008

a fine poem with equally fine imagery

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Kesav Easwaran 04 August 2008

love as deep as the deep blue sea...here love itself is deep sea... some lines like 'sky kisses the ocean..' are sweetly romantic...you could have reduced the ‘ism’ impact a bit...nevertheless an impressive write... lacking not in good imageries...10 votes i give

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PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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