Your eyes are in my heart,
vast, deep, bluish,
A sweet breeze now touches
the brain, heart, mind, and soul,
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A Beautiful poem. This poem itself is winking its eyes with love. It captivates the readers from beginning till end. I liked the flow of words and many interesting lines, adds beauty to this poem. Loved reading it. I will be reading yours many more poems. Thank you for the beautiful comment as a poet.
There are only four questions of value in life. What is sacred? Of what is the spirit made? What is worth living for, and what is worth dying for? The answer to each is the same: only love.......
as commented before, the description of the eyes through the entire poem somehow grips the reader and the poem itself is beautiful - it's amazing - every word used fits perfectly
A different noushad. Different from his usual. Highly lyrical and romantic but as usual with philosophical quest.
I like that in this whole journey one thing remained...the eyes...vast, deep, bluish...nice work
awww its beautiful, i dont know how you could come up with something like that. you are a great poet.
Love and love together...what a perfect combination and piece! ! ! heartfelt...
wings of love, beauty and eternity all merge into one.................. such a beautiful expression, your poem is very magical and takes the reader to flow in its rhyme. excellent work of art. surely a 10.
Tender and romantic, full of good imagery too,10 for this from me, Lynda xx
love as deep as the deep blue sea...here love itself is deep sea... some lines like 'sky kisses the ocean..' are sweetly romantic...you could have reduced the ‘ism’ impact a bit...nevertheless an impressive write... lacking not in good imageries...10 votes i give
Your eyes in my heart, vast, deep, bluish, a sweet breeze now touches the brain, heart, mind and soul, Fine expressions of love...... very fine poem. tony