Love And Life And Laughter Comments

This is a well-written poetry. Love And Life And The Laughter are Everything.

very good well put together, I could imagine walking through that one.

Lovely and well written

The first set of lines are like EVERYTHING! ! Nice poem.

ok ruth thanks for checking it out.

It doesn't quite do it for me, this one...

Nice poem... good rhyming... keep it up... Terry

I like the aY it brought thoughts nd ffeelings

1.I am wishing my friend and his new wife a life filled with those 3 ingredients.2 The fence represents the single life and the later touched on uncertainty.3 lol

First of all i notice that the Laughter wich is in the title is not properly showed in the poem. The lines do represent love and life but laughter is only said in the second line and not really shown in the words. also what does no more on the fence represent? I could not possibly know from what i have read. Other than that placesing some punctuation in the right areas is all that you really need. The poem is fine other wise but does not really stand out like other poems and i dont really feel as if it will bring me back to read it again. Thank you

The light you have beside of you It guides you from uncertainty You'll no longer be asking who You'll be sharing with eternity indeed these lines hv poured in good job! !

This made me smile.

like the begining, body lukd wavy, bt gud nonetheless

Your poem on love, life and laughter is well written keep it up.

it's not bad. just remember, gareth...not all poems have to rhyme. let your thoughts pour onto the paper..don't force them...and then once you've drained the mind...begin to pick apart the poem and erase/change unnecessary words. if you can't rhyme a word, don't sweat it...just enter the one that best describes how you 'feel'.

it flows, nice idea Micmac

It simply the best, thanks for inviting me to read this...i guess you put all ingredients here a pinch of smile, a teaspoon of laughter, love as much as you want and pour all life in it..then it's ready to eat..i mean food for poets, a nice poem...it really delightful writing, keep it up my friend! _Unwritten Soul

Soul mates meet. And the flame ignites. It burns hotter the hot. It glows deep within. A spark is it began. And if it be true it will never end. Great Love Poem.

nice..... nooo u r too gud......

the light you have beside of you it guides you from uncertainty, you'll no longer be asking who you'll be sharing with your eternity.. brilliant poem Gareth...awesome! ! !