Wednesday, June 22, 2016

Love And Joy Comments

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Prabir Gayen
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Rudra Mondal 27 June 2020

Flower is nothing but index Through which divinity dawns.

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Rudra Mondal 20 June 2020

Love brings joy Like shower brings flower, Flower is nothing but index Through which divinity dawns.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

Love brings joy! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Srijita Mondal 02 June 2019

Nice poem on PG's friend's boyish love.Aruna is his friend's love unfulfilled and unattained. Aruna here is a symbol of pain and suffering of a dejecced, or self deceived lover.10+

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Prosanta Mondal 01 April 2019

Thou wert always and forever in my dream and my heart panted ever in thy name and still thy tender - taken breath away me from thee. Life's sordid allegory failed to weave a chronicle of my boyish love and thou art now someone's mistress.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 February 2019

u skipped all my comments did u read my ARUNA INSPIRED BY U PG

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 February 2019

Before the MIRROR there was I a REFLECTION of heart just as PURE LOVE but the MIRROR was will-o-the-wisp BROKEN DOWN by the THRUST of COVETOUS TIME .....................///

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2019

you are a lover ROMANTIC JUST be more assertive poetry will flow like the Ganges in your case the BRAHMAPUTRA and more Aruna's likes will fall in love with thee take care of wife will ye marriage must not ever compromised be but always COMPROMISE THOU MUST PG

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 February 2019

goodly written.......................

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Srijita Mondal 19 February 2019

It is a poem of PG's friend's boyish love, he is one of PG's best friends who loved a girl named Aruna.. Aruna is his love unfulfilled and unattained..PG took the story and name of this poem from real incidents and character(from his friend's life) Aruna here is a symbol of pain and suffering of a dejected, or self deceived lover.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2019

...forever in my dream and my heart panted ever in thy name and still thy tender - taken breath away me from thee. Life's sordid allegory failed to weave a chronicle of my boyish love and thou art now someone's mistress. ALL THY SEEK HERE IS THE WHOLE TRUTH MINUS THE ''H'' AND I shall also narrate about another ARUNA who loved some one like ye but ran away with a guy more moneyed They (GALS) all play with lonely hearts CONTD MY WALL

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2019

I proposed with my eyes bowed and thou smiled... Thou went away nodded as if thou cradled into my being and I stood victorious see i told you ur ROMANTIC LIKE ME COMPOSE MORE SUCH POETRY ARUNAS SO MANY WILL come crawling to thee I will also share another guys ARUNA'S STORY They all with moneyed guys flee their number is 15 A R U N A=15==BEAUTY BUT ANYTHING YES MORE MONEY DON'T MISS her now will ye .

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Rajnish Manga 15 November 2017

Thy eyes surveyed my broken legs and I was with my broken heart A wolf wounded by unseen spear. ....feeble I lived with thee.... a shadow lover..... //.... A love story not meant to have a happy ending. Nice one.

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Prabir Gayen 12 February 2019

Very beautiful comment... thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2016

Life's sordid allegory failed to weave a chronicle of my boyish love and thou art now someone's mistress. Ending the poem in a very sad tone......a love that remains not fulfilled...... the pain of it in the background of all that you described in the poem........ a very nice poem..... full of emotions , it carried me away. thank you. tony

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Prabir Gayen 07 February 2019

Thanks dear poet.....

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Prabir Gayen 22 June 2016

It is a poem of my friend's boyish love, Aruna is his love unfulfilled and unattained. Aruna here is a symbol of pain and suffering of a dejecced, or self deceived lover.

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