Am i to be loved by you a day,
and lost for your heart the other?
Know that if you walked away,
i will never love another..
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this is very well done... I loved the expression... you managed to convey your emotions extremely well...awesome job, I can definately relate.
it happens all the time for people to have these feelings, it s not something unusual...but u expressed them good, u said exactly what u felt, nice poem, full with regrets.but...this is life....this is love, isn t it?
I think this poem is really deep- Eman you did a great job on this poem. It seems like you can really feel how hurt u were.
Nicely written poem....I liked it.