Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, May 11, 2012

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God knows why I can't read my own fate!
God knows why love has turned into hate!
God knows I have no more love to waste!
God knows why I am in wretched state!
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THIS IS AGOOD JOB MY MAN ILIKE WHAT I READ..WELL DONE IT GIVE HOPE TO THE HOPLESS ONES

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 May 2012

this poem has a good rhyme pattern, but I don't think God can give you a solution if you can't find it within yourself...

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Sanjay Mehta 12 May 2012

Simple, free flowing, but when HE is with you how can you be late? HIS plans are grand which we mortals have never been able to grasp.

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Gerald Saidi 11 May 2012

This is a good poem especially for performance. It speaks out and wonderfully so

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Daniel Warner 11 May 2012

God knows both love and hate alike.Very spirited very good write.Keep it up.

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Louise Walker 11 May 2012

Great poem I enjoyed it.

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Dave Walker 11 May 2012

A great write, God knows love, good poem.

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Free Bird 11 May 2012

just God know this: D nice write.it was written from heart: D

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Hans Vr 11 May 2012

A good wirte, Asif. I think indeed that God knows. For many things the reason is obvious, but so many things happen that we truly do not understand. Sometimes only years later we can appreciate why God had different plans for us than we desired in the moment. Excellent poem.

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Sai Srujana 11 May 2012

Wow so sentenemental

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Abel John 11 May 2012

This is a real deep piece of mind, really, God knows!

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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