Friday, February 26, 2010

Love And Friend (Retouched) Comments

Rating: 4.4

In my gallery of heart
You as my subject of art
To ask people to ask them-self...
What colors they pick for their friend?
...
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Dev Anand 18 August 2018

My lips, my tongue, my voice verbally deliver a word An art as a theme to thank Live start and end with love For always be my great friend.. beautiful reflection of love and innocence friendship with some one who does not share the body.......... very nice pure friendship.. thaqnk u dear poetess. dev

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

Love of a friend purest like a blessing rain when it fall to kiss dry and hot desert grow and branching for a nice feeling just like a plant greened on desert eyes being comfort calm never less beautiful and blessed... accept all without condition...............beautiful expression with nice theme. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 August 2017

To have someone watch out for you....to cover your back and stand by you throughout your life...you would be the luckiest person on Earth. A lovely poem about the love one feels toward their dearest friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

As your feeling flows! ! But, some friends stay forever. Nice work.

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* Sunprincess * 15 May 2016

.....a beautiful promise of lasting friendship, loved ★

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Harindhar Reddy 25 November 2011

Soul your poem on friendship is hot like chick soup. Hello you are the maker, you are breaker; you are the creator and you are limiter. Lo! Lo! My kindred soul with heart whole and without a hole in you pocket........................ 'My heartbeats repeatedly telling you I could be your third eyes forever Explain the images of art in life' Hello yes friendship is true love between two souls. True friend is a soul mate and a heart mate; Broken friendship is heart ache and cesspool of love lake. Your style lies in your application and analysis of colors to any topic. Soul You are definitely one poet to be watch out. Hey take this garland of flowers - :) :) : It will be my honor if could have a glance on my poem on same topic for its distinct style.. Larry and Harry! Gary and Mary! SHARE A1 FRIENDSHIP STORY (Part-2)

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Shadow Girl 18 July 2011

This is really a beautiful poem US it makes me think deeply. This is first time i read this one and i really like it...thanks for such a lovely read! SG

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Rekha Mandagere 18 March 2011

Beautiful, innocent, refreshing sentiments of great love is well fitted in a gallery by an expert artist in the background of eye-catching colours.The comparison of love to rain water is a brilliant analysis. Great feeling is presented in this tender age. Excellent work my son, keep inspiring the world with your pure thoughts.

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Dove Allen 11 October 2010

Ahh...the fruition of true friendship gives sweet love's nectar to our thirsting hearts which need. An oasis in the desert...the refreshing of the soul's drought. This poem is a true reflection of seeing through the prism of love! Thanks for a great work on the nature of friendship!

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Anita Trivedi 11 September 2010

A beautiful beautiful poem........ I promise u will be my good friend. I pomise u will have me as your eyes for ever......... Very beautifully written..............

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Dia Snopi 30 August 2010

wowwww, , , , , beautiful poem, , , very nice n deep word, , , i like soooooooooo much, , your wellwisher.... DIA..

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 July 2010

‘losing a friend mean losing our eyes..’ ~ Sure friends are extra vision to us…if we really consider God as friend then it becomes ‘Omnivision’…fine feelings poured in amazing way in this poetry… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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love is not only for a lover it also make for a friend and great love for God love of friend.. yes it is friend too.. nicely crafted poem.. i liked it., ....10

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i promise u will have me as your eyes forever a beautiful promise of friendship clear seeing

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Very well written poem...beautifully expressed...a love and a friend...amazing

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Love is all encompassing, God is love. It is faceted and for all. A lovely poem to read indeed! ; D

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Roshan Roy 01 March 2010

Lovely poem. You really think positive. I hope to learn something from it.

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