Love And Friend (Retouched) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Love And Friend (Retouched)

Rating: 4.4


In my gallery of heart
You as my subject of art
To ask people to ask them-self...
What colors they pick for their friend?
Common question plays on mind
If our choice, wrongly taken
Can the heart be mend again?

Observe the piece carefully
Good one naturally touch gently
Only can brush with sincerely hand
A Magic touch of soft blend
Whatever colors to be now
Like or not you will know
As your feeling flows
by someone call friend?
or love? friend, love
For hours they stuck,
Just confused in muse
Figuring an abstract their feeling reflects
Red real love bound on blue true love
Purple explain how love is not only for a lover
It designed to fit someone called friend
by my great love, My dear God

Love of a friend
purest like a blessing rain
when it fall to kiss dry and hot desert
grow and branching for a nice feeling
just like a plant greened on desert
eyes being comfort
calm never less
beautiful and blessed...
accept all without condition

A true friend
Speak deep in heart
Nothing with money
Sweeter than honey
Hate to hate
Love to love
When we need and we get feed
Love present everytime friends meet
Count your feeling, blessing

Color will fades
When you losing a true friend
The art will less it's intense
losing our eyes...blinding will
losing a taste of friendship..Miss the sweet
losing a sweet of memory...Loose the glory
we need a friend to see and you my eyes
Shall be blend our souls
For the ray of light invades
To be a masterpiece of art

We need to hold together
Avoid all seven colors fade
because you are my hidden sight
My heart swimming in our glade
So u could see how beautiful to make
Love is for you
For a friend
For someone like you

My lips, my tongue, my voice
verbally deliver a word
An art as a theme to thank
Live start and end with love
For always be my great friend
Grant you will never losing me
If you could hear me

My heartbeats repeatedly telling you
I could be your third eyes forever
Explain the images of art in life
So friend will keep you sight always clear
Friend or Love? it is the same?
My art is colorful blue
The art of heart is you
Framing you now
As my precious art subject
So keep it to be happy forever
Forever with you

: : : : : : : : : : : : Theme: Friendship: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
We forgotten how deep friendship can bring, It's a love
that we need to protect, to keep in rest of our life :)
This poem has second version== bouquet of word......

Dedicated to all my friends for all cares and hearts for me
(Art of Heart)
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Old version

People say what is
friend?
what is love?
they always confused
because
love is not only for a lover
it also makes for a friend
and great love for God
love of friend
like...
a rain that
fall on dry and hot desert
then it grows into a nice feeling
just like a plant greened on desert
beautiful and blessed...
a true friend
nothing with money
sweeter than honey
hate to hate friend
love to love friend
because
losing a friend
mean
losing our eyes..
losing a taste of friendship
losing a sweet of memory
each of the ray of light invades
don't let the seven colors fade
so here
i just want to say
thanks for be my good friend
i promise u will have
me as your eyes forever
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 25 November 2011

Soul your poem on friendship is hot like chick soup. Hello you are the maker, you are breaker; you are the creator and you are limiter. Lo! Lo! My kindred soul with heart whole and without a hole in you pocket........................ 'My heartbeats repeatedly telling you I could be your third eyes forever Explain the images of art in life' Hello yes friendship is true love between two souls. True friend is a soul mate and a heart mate; Broken friendship is heart ache and cesspool of love lake. Your style lies in your application and analysis of colors to any topic. Soul You are definitely one poet to be watch out. Hey take this garland of flowers - :) :) : It will be my honor if could have a glance on my poem on same topic for its distinct style.. Larry and Harry! Gary and Mary! SHARE A1 FRIENDSHIP STORY (Part-2)

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Shadow Girl 18 July 2011

This is really a beautiful poem US it makes me think deeply. This is first time i read this one and i really like it...thanks for such a lovely read! SG

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Rekha Mandagere 18 March 2011

Beautiful, innocent, refreshing sentiments of great love is well fitted in a gallery by an expert artist in the background of eye-catching colours.The comparison of love to rain water is a brilliant analysis. Great feeling is presented in this tender age. Excellent work my son, keep inspiring the world with your pure thoughts.

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Dove Allen 11 October 2010

Ahh...the fruition of true friendship gives sweet love's nectar to our thirsting hearts which need. An oasis in the desert...the refreshing of the soul's drought. This poem is a true reflection of seeing through the prism of love! Thanks for a great work on the nature of friendship!

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Anita Trivedi 11 September 2010

A beautiful beautiful poem........ I promise u will be my good friend. I pomise u will have me as your eyes for ever......... Very beautifully written..............

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Dev Anand 18 August 2018

My lips, my tongue, my voice verbally deliver a word An art as a theme to thank Live start and end with love For always be my great friend.. beautiful reflection of love and innocence friendship with some one who does not share the body.......... very nice pure friendship.. thaqnk u dear poetess. dev

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

Love of a friend purest like a blessing rain when it fall to kiss dry and hot desert grow and branching for a nice feeling just like a plant greened on desert eyes being comfort calm never less beautiful and blessed... accept all without condition...............beautiful expression with nice theme. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 August 2017

To have someone watch out for you....to cover your back and stand by you throughout your life...you would be the luckiest person on Earth. A lovely poem about the love one feels toward their dearest friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

As your feeling flows! ! But, some friends stay forever. Nice work.

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* Sunprincess * 15 May 2016

.....a beautiful promise of lasting friendship, loved ★

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