Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Love And Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love once lost, is lost forever.
Once it goes, it comes back never.
It leaves back yearnings deep in the heart,
Released as sighs when it quietly falls apart.
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Mary Forrester 01 February 2015

A lovely poem about losing a loved one and the pain we all experience.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2020

Thank you, @Mary Forrester, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment. Much appreciated.

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Cat Hodgson 24 October 2014

it certainly would take a lot to forgive some circumstances...

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Dog Hoart 06 November 2018

was an accidental press

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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2020

'it certainly would take a lot to forgive some circumstances...' - I agree to that, @Cat Hodgson. Not that withstanding, having been able to forgive is extremely rewarding in some difficult circumstances.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 October 2014

the last line is a fine line. loved.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2020

Thanks for reading the poem and selecting the best line of it. Your kind comment has inspired me a lot, dear poet @Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar.

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Valsa George 16 October 2014

Love may be dimmed or lost for ever due to reasons manifold.....! But to reinstate it is not however impossible, though may be hard! The poem digs deep into the core of feelings and concludes with a salient message! Beautifully rhyming too!

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2020

Thanks for bringing out the essence of the poem in deft hands, dear poet Valsa! Much obliged.

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