Sunday, June 2, 2013

Love And Dying Doves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is made of lies
And all of it countless friends
Fall like dying doves
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Kevin Patrick
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Danny Draper 14 June 2013

Love the last stanza particularly and the last line, a great retort to the old adage of line 16. A prophetic and sage piece.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

real imagery make this poem live simple but right gives breath to every word of it I really liked it, and yeah you right; love is a mystery, gambling of a courage thanks for sharing

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