Friday, October 30, 2015

Love And Dust Comments

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LOVE AND DUST

'Nothing lasts, ' you said, gently tying
The laces of your fashionable jogging shoes,
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Hardeep Sabharwal
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Chinedu Dike 06 November 2015

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Good piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated into a lovely piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Souren Mondal 30 October 2015

A really interesting read... Thanks for sharing..

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Hardeep Sabharwal 31 October 2015

Thank you friend

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 October 2015

My mouth filled with the dust of your words, .. .. I turned myself into dust, To make my love everlasting. very good, Hardeep. I've enjoyed your well structured write. Thanks for sharing Cheers

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Hardeep Sabharwal 30 October 2015

Thank you so much

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A. k. Mannu 30 October 2015

Nice poem good luck

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Hardeep Sabharwal 30 October 2015

Thank you A k mannu

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