Love And Die Comments

Miss Kimber has a point...imagery creates a decorum of capture...that said...you have a natural keeness for structure, which is everso important, if you want your Reads to read your Poems the way you would have recited them...This has a very smooth flux to it....Commendable work, young lady!

i liked the poem just try and use wordss that express how you are feeling.. every poem is something to be proud of but with a little bit of heart you can make it something even greater than a memory you can make it something you acctully feel inside.