Love And Crime............ Comments

well written with emotions........innerconscience and the outer world......always contradict with one another........your crafting emotional outburst in the poem is very very nice...... see my 10++

I have written similar things.. like I just reacged death.. but this is a million times better :) you have a great talen, and i could feel you, feel your pain while i read it.10+++++++++++++++

Sebastine, this is fantastic, I love some of the phrasings, it is a brilliant poem. Keep writing moore poems like this!

ello sebastine....... very very well penned! keep it coming you are so good! i almost cried sitting here in school reading this! ! ! nice job! keep writing and thanks for sharing! 10+

Dude nicely penned with beautifull matter

hi sebastine....... very well written.. very interesting poem...... i felt that was watching a true love story. each and every lines of the poem rolls the picture in my mind. love is eternal so y u kill your self for the girl who dont know the feel of love. failure of love gives dead ful pain that u explained in good flow.....: -)

wow this is incredible.im speechless lol.but i can say that you put deep thought into this poem and how you came up with the concept is beyond me.A VERY INTERESTING POEM!

Hey Sebastine....very well written..deeply passionate, poignant, heaart-rending, etal a great piece....keep up! ! ! ....deeply touching! ! !

detailed way of dying, , , , sweet enginneer, ths s hw it goes.. from an hour a minute nd seconds, ur waiting somebody stops u.. so, , whats the purpose of killing urself.. love? ..yes...love s all n ur heart the wrld will not luf when u die but'' she'' lufs at u coz she wins coz, for her, ur life has no value she s cruel as the tidal wave crimes? what crime r u saying? love will not be a crime both of u r not criminals but...if love s a crime...my gosh... ALL HUMAN BEINGS ARE ALL CRIMINALS... .......take note....what trigger r u saying? be sure its not an illegal firearms ha? or else, , , that s the crime ur lookin.....hehehehhehe...lav ya...ur poems r sad ha....but u made it, , , cheers...