Wednesday, June 10, 2009

! Love And Conflict ! Comments

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His curious brain installed
one graphic accurate eye
towards my life and in turn
God installed one
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GAYATRI NAMBIAR
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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 10 June 2009

Very brilliantly written poem Gayatriji. Kudos.

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Seema Aarella 10 June 2009

'his tangled brain of love and conflict'.....impressive lines, clean write!

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Mithali Vasudev 10 June 2009

God decides who is elite and not, No one can escape from his eyes; humans only try to compete with their power and influence but at the end fail. 10++

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