Thursday, March 1, 2018

Love And Change Comments

Rating: 5.0

A heart seeks for another heart
that palpitates the way same,
while Change comes as an intruder
deeming Love one of its game…
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Bri Edwards 25 May 2018

A synonym of palpitates, palpates, may suit you better. I DON'T BELIEVE I CAN FIGURE THIS POEM OUT. Of course i'm not expert when it comes to love! ! Bri :)

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Perdita Young 26 May 2018

Thanks a lot for the visit, Bri...~~~ Indeed, it may fit better to replace it with PALPATES here.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 March 2018

We have to find a new balance for th' ceaselessly crying Love. A so beautifully crafted poem shared here. Thanks poet for it. 10++++

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