Love, Ambition, Responsibility And Promise Comments

All your poems capture or describe specific situations and emotions. They feel real to me. I hope you keep on writing, learning, and growing both in life and poetry. I was thinking, , , would'nt it be great to keep on writing and saving your poems for years. How might you feel at 18 0r 21 about your poems from age 14 and 15.

i admire your desire to right poetry. your work has its own right to be qualified technically in the descipline of poetry. just check the first word in the second line, 'fou|' (what is this?) . And try to apply some metric and rhyming style to share a bit your beautiful piece. Thank you...all the best