Monday, October 3, 2011

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Love has never really been good to me.
I fall in it and scrape my knee.
Too many times I have hurt myself badly
Scars on my heart where it breaks
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Mary Wiede
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Stefanie Fontker 05 October 2011

The title of this poem is what attracted me to it, you've done a great job of reeling me in. This is a very lovely write, your emotions are well expressed and well displayed. I really enjoyed this piece, you have a talent, and I hope you'll continue to write.

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Crimson Love 03 October 2011

A very deep and beautiful poem, very well written :)

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Mary Wiede

Mary Wiede

Bryan, Texas
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