Friday, July 3, 2015

Love All Love All Comments

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The world never lacked a diver,
At times the sea was rough,
But someone was always there,
Responding to the call of inviting sea,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2015

I don't say anything! But, love all and, bring peace to the earth. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2015

I don’t say anything, To me it appears a human heart, Circulating the same red blood, And providing the oxygen of truth, To the sons who vary and forget the fact, They all are descendants of Adam and Eve, .....right depiction. A beautiful poem I like most. Thank u for sharing. ... 10

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Valsa George 04 July 2015

This is a wonderful write Akhtar ji! Men of courage dared and we the progeny enjoy the fruits of their labour! Again God has only one face.... the face of love! Great thoughts...... A 10

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Amitava Sur 03 July 2015

A lovely penning on love with a hint of loving the origin, not the attire.

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 July 2015

A great message.........................10

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