You see...you love....you know... you don't...
you want...you can't
you try...but dry
you cry....but why
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but coz I wanna see u again....feel u again...be with you again....try again.....hope again.... ........Love again
I love Rumi's concept of Love! ! Do give it a read! Love doesnt ruin you but gives you a splendid triumph over your selfish-self! The word selfish-self is what Rumi's poems go around! Thanks! Concepts should be very clear about what Love actually is!
One's experiences make one's concepts. The start seems to be an eminent change in the life. The cruise, however, is a little tricky; an unrevealed destination might be a risky desire to achieve. I do agree with what you said. No doubt, Love lets you see beyond the dilemma of strained desires. And for sure, it revives one's soul, heart, and thinking. I greatly admire your taste for love. I believe that there is a great fortune ahead of you.
A fine start with a nice poem, Sam. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.
The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poemhunter.
but coz I wanna see u again....feel u again...be with you again....try again.....hope again.... ........Love again.love and desire...... intense desire so expressive. tony