Monday, May 2, 2016

Love Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bent and broken
on love's devious trail
Scattered like autumn leaves
in the lanes of abandonment
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 September 2022

What a lovely poem! I sincerely admire the lucidity of poetic expression, the flow and the psyche of this excellent poem. Keep writing! !

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Love or death-there are really only two choices. Well done Nosheen. Such a sweet, sentimental song about the queen of emotions that could only be written by a tender and beautiful heart!

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Edmund Strolis 02 May 2016

Starry eyes in the blank voids. New flowers, bright and fed upon hope and nourished with happiness. The leaf strewn lane, alone. Once the heart has soared to the colossal heights and has been bewitched within its spell how gray and jagged are these dark valleys without the magic. The dilemma of poets, the despair of the broken heart. Must find love, must find a cure and soar out of the darkness.

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Valsa George 02 May 2016

Wake up from the dungeons of despair.......... Love knocks at the door....... admit it to soar to new horizons! Lovely write capable of filling the heart with a fresh verve!

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Barry Middleton 02 May 2016

Nicely written. It is indeed important to love.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2016

Yes, love is the answer! Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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