Wednesday, October 30, 2013

>≫≫Love - A Nest Of A Bird And A Bug Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inside the nest of love
Two chambers tucked together
Side by side allowed to live
Two opposite creatures
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Abdul Wahab
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 November 2013

where paradoxical reference grief and joy both resides together to gather woes and to woo lovely one 10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2013

Wow a sublime unique poem on love. Mayb its mortal to b bitten by a lovebug but its immoral n bad to build a lovenest, if u go by its dictionary meaning. So dis poem fascinating in metaphor. Thanx for yor reviews too.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 October 2013

the subtle journey into the hidden depths of love makes this poem an amazing read!

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2013

the last stanza is beautiful. It defines the poem, I like it, But as the poet I will let you make the finale decision excellent write, 10+

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