(love) A Kiss Comments

dear poet the poem word order is very nice thank

Brilliant use of feelings using both the tactile and the visual. Also rhythmically hypnotic word repetition.

Nicely done, Jared... dan

Nicely done so right, rightly done by light. You write well, and you are right. To each their own, it's how you put your spin on looks of others. Best regards-Mike Gale.

Really liked this poem. :) Awesome choice of words.

Oh! what a marvelous eternal kiss you are describing.Splendid K.................

I enjoy your romantic poems particularly. This is stunning.