Today i feel like a blossomed rose,
as the time is passing on its toes.
I feel the hush of the breeze,
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Wow what a lyrical love poem. Yeah parents usually know how to guide us in love matters. For we may blindly fall for d worst man and ruin our lives. U wrote an excellent poem. Pls coment my latest poem too.
great poem especially the rhythm and the flow the emotions make this poem alive so, thanks for sharing this beautiful poem
Wow it's even much more better than mine... I couldn't believe my eyes... That was a very perfect style of writing.
very beautiful, i wonder you could come and visit my profile and go through my poems and comment