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Friday, May 2, 2008

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love is not a petty thing
to throw away in trash
It has a deeper meaning still
it has no means in cash
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Paul Hansford 02 May 2008

This is a nice poem, with a good rhythm. If you could get lines 10/12 to rhyme as well, to finish off, it would be even better.

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