Wednesday, August 6, 2008

Love? Comments

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Is love a bird that comes,
then flys away
or is it a friendly dog
that trys to stay.
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Adeline Foster 06 August 2008

Wonderful little poem, so many points to appreciate in this. I like the questioning and the rhymes are not forced. Just lovely. Some of those answers can be found in my poem called The Bloom of Youth. Please read. Adeline

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Ency Bearis 06 August 2008

nice querries...you'll know it when you got older..and they will answer your confusions...great write... Ency Bearis

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