Saturday, June 7, 2008

Love Comments

Rating: 4.2

With love in the air all around,
Cupid's floral arrows hound,
My love at first sight I found,
Now my feet are not on ground.
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C. P. Sharma
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Shashendra Amalshan 02 July 2009

this is unique one about love sir.. you know many poets have tried to express their feelings or attitude to love, a great poet always try to do something innovative or express himself in a different way, this is nice write sir! ! 10++= with love shan

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Flowing beautiful love poem all leading down to the last stanza of delightful words such as honey comb, lotus and love's red room. 10 Karin Anderson

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Christopher Montalvo 20 May 2009

very soft and smooth, i like it!

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Catrina Heart 17 May 2009

Such beauty of words dressed your lovely poem. Great end rhymes written...........10

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Marilyn Lott 17 May 2009

May your love last forever and ever. Very sweet and lighthearted full of promise and hope for the future. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Roshni D'Souza 17 May 2009

Silently it has captured my being, I don't want to loosen its string...lovely lines and imagery...Beautiful to read!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

'My love is now my honey comb, Lotus ever in my being bloom, Now there is no place for gloom, I am in bliss in love's red room.' Lovely poem, nice metaphor is used.10++

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Livvy Peacock 17 May 2009

I can think of two words to describe this poem; beautiful and LOVELY! ! ! !

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Analou Pabalate 17 May 2009

i think i am in love again........................wow! very romantic..............i hope this poem could be an eye opener to those lovers who had lots oflovers and loving another lover.........hmmmmm..........fellows.......... stick to one only..............just think of this poem...see? very lovely...thanks for sharing.......

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Alf Hutchison 16 May 2009

C p where would life be without love... lovely.. Alf

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Ejaz Khan 16 May 2009

How very beautiul to see someone in love. A word, so very loaded, so very deep, an ocean that never dries, a wonder that never ends. Greetings for trying to capture this essence divine, I hope and wish it to become contagious one day. Well done! Regards

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Meggie Gultiano 16 May 2009

wow..this is a nice and a well penned write. From the top to the bottom..and i just adore and love it. wonderful... Hugs, meggie

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Vijay Menon 16 May 2009

nice lines well crafted words good poetic sense sir i am not good enough to critique your writing skills, like you i am an ardent devotee of dattareya

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Bob Blackwell 16 May 2009

Without love our world would die, lets hope it stays breathes new life into an ever waiting world.

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Jazz Annis 16 May 2009

that was a very nice poem about your love for her...

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Carol Gall 16 May 2009

very lovely poem love at its best 10

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Sarah Sisson 16 December 2008

So creative....lovely!

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Bonnie Collins 14 July 2008

very well structured with an even flow of happiness with newly found love, penned very sweetly and to the point, I liked the way your words flow in this as it is easy to read and a pleausure to share and dream for a moment if you wil, about cupid when he struck all of us for a first visit...... Very gently penned.... Bonnie

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 June 2008

A good poem on love, well rhyming and meaningful. God is love. Love is God. Love is the inborn nature of not only mankind, but also animals and birds and other species. Love is the source for all reproductions Imagine if there is no love on this earth, will the world exist? .

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2008

a good poem worshipping love...very impressive and much enjoyable...the last line is a gem

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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