With love in the air all around,
Cupid's floral arrows hound,
My love at first sight I found,
Now my feet are not on ground.
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Flowing beautiful love poem all leading down to the last stanza of delightful words such as honey comb, lotus and love's red room. 10 Karin Anderson
Such beauty of words dressed your lovely poem. Great end rhymes written...........10
May your love last forever and ever. Very sweet and lighthearted full of promise and hope for the future. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Silently it has captured my being, I don't want to loosen its string...lovely lines and imagery...Beautiful to read!
'My love is now my honey comb, Lotus ever in my being bloom, Now there is no place for gloom, I am in bliss in love's red room.' Lovely poem, nice metaphor is used.10++
I can think of two words to describe this poem; beautiful and LOVELY! ! ! !
i think i am in love again........................wow! very romantic..............i hope this poem could be an eye opener to those lovers who had lots oflovers and loving another lover.........hmmmmm..........fellows.......... stick to one only..............just think of this poem...see? very lovely...thanks for sharing.......
How very beautiul to see someone in love. A word, so very loaded, so very deep, an ocean that never dries, a wonder that never ends. Greetings for trying to capture this essence divine, I hope and wish it to become contagious one day. Well done! Regards
wow..this is a nice and a well penned write. From the top to the bottom..and i just adore and love it. wonderful... Hugs, meggie
nice lines well crafted words good poetic sense sir i am not good enough to critique your writing skills, like you i am an ardent devotee of dattareya
Without love our world would die, lets hope it stays breathes new life into an ever waiting world.
very well structured with an even flow of happiness with newly found love, penned very sweetly and to the point, I liked the way your words flow in this as it is easy to read and a pleausure to share and dream for a moment if you wil, about cupid when he struck all of us for a first visit...... Very gently penned.... Bonnie
A good poem on love, well rhyming and meaningful. God is love. Love is God. Love is the inborn nature of not only mankind, but also animals and birds and other species. Love is the source for all reproductions Imagine if there is no love on this earth, will the world exist? .
a good poem worshipping love...very impressive and much enjoyable...the last line is a gem
this is unique one about love sir.. you know many poets have tried to express their feelings or attitude to love, a great poet always try to do something innovative or express himself in a different way, this is nice write sir! ! 10++= with love shan