I so, oh so, softly loved her
we so, oh so harmonized
in the hollow of the morning
we in concert all combined
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Thats lovely to read and more so to experience. Nice work.
i agree that it has an Irish feel to. Good put to music. Liz Munro.
I like this very much Sean, but I have to say that it reminds of your namesake, James. I'm not suggetsing a particular work, I am just saying that it is the wording. This has such an Irish feel to it (the Modernist Irish) , in one sense you could view it as dated, but there is such a freshness toit that it would be hard to hold that view for too long.
This is a beautiful poem. I think you did an excellent job with it. cora fazio