Love made me naked
and burned away dross,
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You have so succinctly described what we do when we love...expose ourselves and leave ourselves open to such indescribable pain. But in the long run, if it is the right person, then it is worth the agony. Really good poem, Max.
I like this 'Love'..it has a sensual, daring to receive quality about it! The reception in the giving is a twist on the subject. Nice. L
The pain hidden under grassy glades You have expressed that bland look everyone deals with daily, not realizing what is just under the surface. The ending is like the scratching of chalk on a board, Linda
In a way love will always hurt.. Before the rainbow there is always Rain! I liked the poem, it was very heartfelt to all the heartbroken souls! HBH