Love Comments

LOove is a breathe of life.We can still live without love, but a handicapped.

Hello Mona.. haven't heard from you recently... Still expressing yourself through poems good.. you raise lots of questions here.. you are not the only person, who ask these kind of questions.. I mean lots of people do at least in some point in their lives. good indeed.. hey I can think of dozens of love songs to quote for you, lolss .. this is good lovess shan

Hello Mona.. haven't heard from you recently... Still expressing yourself through poems good.. you raise lots of questions here.. you are not the only person, who ask these kind of questions.. I mean lots of people do at least in some point in their lives. good indeed.. hey I can think of dozens of love songs to quote for you, lolss .. this is good lovess shan

Hello Mona.. haven't heard from you recently... Still expressing yourself through poems good.. you raise lots of questions here.. you are not the only person, who ask these kind of questions.. I mean lots of people do at least in some point in their lives. good indeed.. hey I can think of dozens of love songs to quote for you, lolss .. this is good lovess shan

really opens up what woman see of love... hidden depths thank you

Wow, this is such a true and inspiring poem to all those who wish to find their one true love. Tyrone is that person to me. Everything that you've put into this poem like emotion, such feelings, thoughts, and also the things that seperate you from any other woman this man has seen..such a great poem, you keep writing and i'll keep reading. ~ Hazel G.E

good work hun..10 out of 10

I forgot to tell you where you have grammar errors. 'do anybody every know? they say it when you feel a certain way' the correct way is ' does anybody ever know? they say its when you feel a certain way' i hope ur not thinking im being cheeky and rude, just wanted to help out :) feel free to be honest about my poems :)

You have good ideas in this poem but there are quite a few grammar mistakes and i think you could have written it alot better as i dont think you made the subject strong enough, perhaps use some imagery words and metaphors, add colour to your writing :) i hope that was a helpful comment :) please dont hesitate to tell me what you think of my poems, my newest one is called ' Clustered in the clouds ' thanx :)