Tuesday, May 8, 2007

Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

In my life I strived a lot
To find love, until I lost
Now I understand what is love
When you are hungry
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sOoraj Pottekat
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Marvin Brato 08 May 2007

The thoughts of love you have described in this poem is real my friend, it is love when something good happens to an individual. good write. a little improvementon spelling it could deserve a 10.

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