Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

the simpliest form of emotion
that complicates your world.
you never forget that
feeling
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Sylvia Thomas
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

Lovely composition..............

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Dee Daffodil 06 September 2006

You have a very keen ability to analyze emotions, and be very specific about the effect of emotions on people. This is a lovely quality to have. Well done. Hugs, Dee

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John Walls 31 August 2006

Beautiful Poem! It's wonderfully composed, and the last line really made its mark with me. -John

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Evymic Moore 25 August 2006

wow that's kinda deep i like it

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Michael Gale 23 August 2006

A beautiful piece of Lit you've writ that dances around the inside of thine head with a magical note in close proximity of the heart strings played yet gently so tender and dear. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Sylvia Thomas

Sylvia Thomas

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