Love Comments

Love is the ultimate drug and the secret to life, so many get caught by the effects and don't know how to nourish it correctly. It falls victim to corruption and death, sadness, and despair settle in its place. Your poem portrays that well thank you!

Desire as enemy; Imagination of getting inside a cage of fire; Sheer delight to hug the world inside, making the sane insane, dreaming wild, yearning soul…… Very good use of images and the words……. You have a powerful imaginative mind. Make use of it to write romantic poetry.

Indeed our greatest enemy could be our desires if we become their slaves. An insightful portrayal of might spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss, nicely written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing.