your knife like words
pierced through my heart
to pieces its all shattered
its so suffocating
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when at last i found it you say its over my world came down hard. love is a mystery.. sadness because of lack of faithfulness creates lot of pain. Without truth there is no relationship...... a fact which u hve written in yur poem.. thank u. tony
Love and hate had been the ways of mankind ever since. Nice work.
we love but sometimes in return we get but pain.nice poem indeed.
a very heart touching poem expressing the pain of a lover's broken heart.. thank you
Splendid one. Thanks to share with us, dear poet!