Thursday, February 6, 2014

Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lonely, longing and in lust
But needing someone I can trust
Not just for a year or two
But for my life the whole way through
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David Pass
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Chinedu Dike 24 February 2017

Beautiful depiction of marital bliss despite ups and downs of life is aptly captured in the poem. Lovely piece nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Thanks for sharing Dave.

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