Waiting for my Bus
Running out of time
Burning hot
Longing for a rain
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For the most part, there was a subtle meaning that broke free from the challenges of your interpretations of english. And was beautiful. However, some portions need more attention since its in english. Still, nice job and creative thought. Thanks for sharing it.
A nice poetic imagination, Anusha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.