Thursday, August 2, 2012

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you should only listen

listen to the sun
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marzie moradi
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Kelly Seale 02 August 2012

I listen, and your words reached me... across the miles and oceans and land. Great write here, -Kelly.

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

A simple yet beautiful celebration of nature...it is also a part of faith that all living things hum praises to the creator...i see your lines in that perspective keep writing :)

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

@ Sina Farahzadeh i beg to differ respected poet poetry isn’t about morals....only its about feelings...the state of mind you are in....the last bleat from the choking throat of a smitten gazelle is for many a poet inspiration...poetic expression /arts cannot be shrouded and cloaked in stifling preconceived idealistic ossification. Otherwise stalactites and stalagmites are so beautiful hanging where they are, beautiful but not poetry. Marvelous yet unseen unless a light is shown on them in the abysmal crypts, that light my dear poet is the power and beauty of poetry…. Blessings

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Sina Farajzadeh 02 August 2012

Oh, you believe that listening to the nature makes us fly, yet I believe some morals make us fly. Good natural poem.

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