you should only listen
listen to the sun
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A simple yet beautiful celebration of nature...it is also a part of faith that all living things hum praises to the creator...i see your lines in that perspective keep writing :)
@ Sina Farahzadeh i beg to differ respected poet poetry isn’t about morals....only its about feelings...the state of mind you are in....the last bleat from the choking throat of a smitten gazelle is for many a poet inspiration...poetic expression /arts cannot be shrouded and cloaked in stifling preconceived idealistic ossification. Otherwise stalactites and stalagmites are so beautiful hanging where they are, beautiful but not poetry. Marvelous yet unseen unless a light is shown on them in the abysmal crypts, that light my dear poet is the power and beauty of poetry…. Blessings
Oh, you believe that listening to the nature makes us fly, yet I believe some morals make us fly. Good natural poem.
I listen, and your words reached me... across the miles and oceans and land. Great write here, -Kelly.