When eyes can't endure your splendid rays
It searches for a balmy bower.
When skin can't bear your searing kiss
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your hide and seek with Sun constitutes a worthy fantasy of love enthralling me.....full 10 points to you...
Hi Jaya, A beautiful poem on Love. 'Sun' as a metaphor for male lover is common in Indian poetry. Right from the times of our epics. Lotus stands in for the female counterpart. But, there is a very beautiful poem by great Malayalam poet Sri G. Sankara Kurup (Winner of the Bharatiy Jnanapith Award first time ever) , name Surya Kanti-means Sunflower. Now your poem takes a new angle. The scorching heat of the sunrays, the dazzling light etc. forces the lover to look for a cool shade. But, when disaster strikes, she looks forward to him for cover. Beautifully done.10++
Thank you for your comment n for this valuable information.