Saturday, February 25, 2017

Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

When eyes can't endure your splendid rays
It searches for a balmy bower.

When skin can't bear your searing kiss
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Jaya Das
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Unnikrishnan E S 26 February 2017

Hi Jaya, A beautiful poem on Love. 'Sun' as a metaphor for male lover is common in Indian poetry. Right from the times of our epics. Lotus stands in for the female counterpart. But, there is a very beautiful poem by great Malayalam poet Sri G. Sankara Kurup (Winner of the Bharatiy Jnanapith Award first time ever) , name Surya Kanti-means Sunflower. Now your poem takes a new angle. The scorching heat of the sunrays, the dazzling light etc. forces the lover to look for a cool shade. But, when disaster strikes, she looks forward to him for cover. Beautifully done.10++

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Jaya Das 26 February 2017

Thank you for your comment n for this valuable information.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2017

Searing kiss! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jaya Das 25 February 2017

thanks a lot

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Kishore Kumar Das 25 February 2017

your hide and seek with Sun constitutes a worthy fantasy of love enthralling me.....full 10 points to you...

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