Somebody told it was the color
Of her dress attracted him first
Then her looks, as the gist
Of the innocence and the valor
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this is a beautiful poem and is inspiring. you have a way with words
So romantic and true to ones heart. It is rare, I believe, to find a true person with the full passion and idea of love. You, my friend, have shown us your heart of love.
really, , this one evoks true feelings in d reader grt poem
So much emotion, a feeling of abandon and very romantic. Your poem is lovely to read! :)
Love has been described in pen by many poets, known and unknown. Your LOVE is devinely re-defined through your own lines...A very well blended poem and mystically poetic. Continue your adventure towards writing....You are gifted! Thanks for sharing.
great poem, kinda like a romantism poem, with your nature analogies
'but it was for me, her eyes that revealed the truth of passion.' great poem my friend, ,10++++
(Love is divine) ... 'tis a g'd poem, , I love this poem! ! ! ! 10++ Plz read my poem(love and love at first sight)
Swirled in that hurricane together Driven by a divine feeling behind us beautiful lines