Love, love, love
Everythings' above.
Needs faith and care
Betwixt the pairs.
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again very simple but with profound meaning.... one humble suggestion, try to pen new themes and subjects.... poetry is an art abducted has to be tackles artistically..... you quite new but I m sure will do better..... b4 posting any of your expressions, revisit your composition again and again till get satisfied....... it's like a painting, needs few touches and light strokes even after completion......
Short, simple and lovely. Keep on writing it will improve your craft of writing poetry
simple yet very effective dear. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s
A very good poem by a lovely poetess who has poured down her heart in it expressing her emotion. A good write indeed