Love means,
God's heart beats
In a divine rhythm
On your bosom.
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I really like the beauty of this poem! ! ! Amazingly put! !
Love makes the world go...and here it has made the poem go at many new places, viz, to hear the heart beat of the Almighty, compared to a sacred passion travelling in space, then after touching lips, hair, eyes finally embraced the ears of the beloved in the form of a rhythmical lullaby which is heard only in silence. A lovely poem indeed! ! !
Love means, God's heart beats in my poem i have stated love is also the blessing of god. best
nice one and capture the heart of many. how elegently you put the words.(kalakki) keep it up.God Bless You!
what a poem VIP! its well written with clear meaning.i just love poetry man.
hmm...its really gud........has lots of meanings....lvd it a looot....
Lovely write-yes love is sacred-the highest frequency! I enjoyed reading your poem
Dear fellow poet I have no words to express on your love rhyme as I am dumbstruck by the deep meaning it carries. Furthermore, I like these poetic lines... 'And your soul lingers on slowly On a celestial meadow Of sacred passion With your luminous eyes' Love is always an ethereal inspiration to you, me, one and everyone. You expressed your love in poetic lines in stylish way. By heart and soul I feel you are have potential to become one the great 21 century poets on romanticism. Decent work with noble passion. Bonvoyage in your poetic journey boss! Rating 10++++++++
Love can always be magic, but magic is often an illusion... Very nice poem...
good visualization. soul inger - soul lingers that embrace - that embraces
This is sovery very pretty...a brillant and soulful love write.
Where do you get all this beautiful words from? You're a real romantic at heart...
I listened to the harp orchestral here...are you playing them Vipins? ? ? hahaha lovely write_Unwritten Soul
a very good write. i like it