Sunday, October 16, 2011

Love Comments

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You live there, i live here,
still we feel close and near.

we never meet, we never kiss,
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Arfa Iris
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Harindhar Reddy 17 October 2011

You rocked my heart with lucid poem of yours. It is pure, transparent, love living in the hearts of a boy and a girl. What a joy! I enjoy reading simple yet reflecting true, original thought of the poetess. 'we know our differences very well but couldn't control and in love we fell' are impressive line which arrested my heart. You can also read my poem Harriet is my Juliet! (A love poem) Hats of to the poet. May You grow as poet just like tree growing tall with lot of fruits. Cheerio for now.

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Shaikh Haneef 16 October 2011

Very interesting poem arfa u really have a words which show's the pureness of love

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Alex Manson 16 October 2011

wow, and in your biography you said you're only a beginner? this is beautiful, very impressive... :)

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Arfa Iris

hyderabad, A.P, India.
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