Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Love? Comments

Rating: 5.0

love i fell is a lie
only breaks you down
tears you apart
eats you alive
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Grace DeVon miller
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Urshula Davis 05 July 2011

love it but u kept me puzzled at the end!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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